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Posted by: totally_desi Jul 25 2006, 01:45 PM

Jassi and Anjali productions present........ Pyar se kyun darte hain dil
"two completely different people destined to become one"

Kripa- Young, happy, carefree, bright, young girl. She dreams about her dream man.
Angad- Engaged to a woman who loves him but he doesn't love her. Practical.,he doesn't believe in love.Helps his father ith the business but wants to be a singer
Sneha-Angad's fiancé and she loves him alot
Aaliyah-Angad's sister that lives with him and their dadi.Shes in college and has a boyfriend named Josh.
Josh-Hes Kripas cousin-brother and is very protective.He is also Aaliyah's boyfriend.
Dadi- A very loving widow she is the grandmother of Angad and Aaliyah.She has been like a mother to them.
Bua ji-She is kripa's bua ji and she lives with her
Suki and Karan-Kripa's parents..they are loving and caring. They the best parents a girl could have!
Sweta- She is a very sweet girl and is like Kripa.She always listens to Kripa.
Rano- She is the little rebel and is very immature.
Naina and Dilip- Parents of Angad and Aaliyah. They work in Europe and come to India for their children once a year. They send their children lots of money and gifts, which is supposed to be their love.

We will post the first part soon

Posted by: manai Jul 25 2006, 05:55 PM

wow great job
looking forward to the first part

Posted by: tublu Jul 26 2006, 06:14 PM

keep up the good work . if you reach a proper stage , you might think of posting it here as well http://www.discusstv.com/reviews

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Jul 27 2006, 01:37 PM

QUOTE(tublu @ Jul 26 2006, 05:44 PM)

keep up the good work . if you reach a proper stage , you might think of posting it here as well http://www.discusstv.com/reviews

thank you tublu for making this a sticky

Posted by: totally_desi Jul 27 2006, 01:59 PM

ya thanks tublu

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Jul 28 2006, 01:54 PM

1st part
riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng[alarm clock]
angad- shut up!
[angad said that as he slams his hand on the alarm clock turning it off]
angad gets out of bed just as dadi walks in
dadi- kya tumko kuch pata hai? aaj tum ko kam per jaana hai
angad- mujhe pata hai dadi. main to bas naana wali ta
dadi- okay okay
[ dadi leaves his bedroom]
angad goes and takes a shower and goes downstairs
aaliyah-bhai bhai bhai ruko
angad- kyun?
aaliyah- woh sneha bhabi phone per hain
angad- woh kya chati hain?
aaliyah- mujhe to nahin pata hain, tum baat karlo
angad thinks[ subah subah kyun woh mujhe parashaan karti hain]
angad- okay give it to me. tum college jao
aaliyah gives the phone to angad
aaliyah- bye angad and dadi!
dadi- bye beta
angad- hi sneha kaisi ho?
sneha- main teek hoon bas i miss you
angad- krrrrrrr sneha krrrrrrrr i krrrrrr think krrrrrrrr my kkkrrrrrrrrr[angad is making the noises]
[angad hangs up]
sneha- what the hell[ she hangs up]
dadi- tum sneha ko nahin pyar karta
angad- dadi tum ko pata hai, main ye sab mom dad ki khush ley karahoon
dadi- tum to apni aur unki zindagi barbaat[angad intterupts]
angad- dadi main clate hoon, aaj heema kaam per aiyegi
dadi- ye ladka kabhi nahin badlaga.
angad- bye dadi
dadi- bye beta
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
at the office
angad is walking in and then he sees heema. Heema works at angad office as a secertary. she wears short skirts and is a total gold digger.
angad- hi heema
heema- hi sir app kaisa ho.[ she says it with her face 4 inches away from angad's]
kanan- angad, sir angad sir angad sir[ she says as she is running from her cabin]
angad- [giving kanan a dirty look] kya hai kanan?
kanan- aap ka dad phone per hai
angad-[ smiling] dad ka phone?
kanan gives the phone to angad. and tells heema to go back to work. heema gives kanan a dirty look, fixes her hair, and goes bk to her computer.
kanan goes back to her cabin
angad- hello[ on the phone]
angad's dad- angad i need you
to go to our offices in Punjab rite now. just get a ticket and go quickly.
angad's mom grabs the phone from her husband.
angad's mom- kaisa ho beta?
angad- main teek
hoon aur aap
angad's mom- main bhi teek hoon, aur aaliyah and tumhari dadi............
[ the phone gets dissconnected]
angad frowning put the phone down and calls to kanan
angad- Kanan i need a ticket to Punjab rite now.
kanan comes out of her cabin with a ticket
kanan- pata hai[ she hands angad the ticket], sir
angad- thanx
kanan- have a gud trip sir
angad heads out of the office
heema- bye sir
[angad turns around and smiles]
kanan- heema tum apni kam karo
heema- whatever
kanan[as she walks away]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
angad goes on an airplane to Punjab
~~~~~~~at the airport~~~~~~~~~
angad is walking holding an address[ of the place where the conference is]
as angad is walking he bumps in to another man. the other man drops a piece a of paper with an address and so does angad. luckily none of the men looked at their addresses.

angad- sorry man
sum guy- it is okay.
both of them have picked up each others papers in a rush to pick up their things
angad- sry again[ he says as he leaves the airport]
Angad grabs a cab to his familys house in Punjab. THere he gets his car and leaves in search of the address. Angad drives for a little bit and still can not find the building.

angad- shit what the hell am i supposed to do now

THen angad gets out of his car in search of sum1 to ask for directions.
He starts walking around this little village[gown].
Angad thinking- i think i should just go home and call kanan she will know]
Angad starts to walk toward his car. THen he sees bhangra dancers dancing. and there is a girl who looks like she isn't part of the group dancing.

angad thinking- wow bohot sunder hai
angad just stands there staring at the girl. he is taken away by this girl]
angad thinking- she is the most beutiful women i have ever seen]
The girl leaves the dancers and goes bk to her friends, laughing.
angad thinking- kya smile hai
THe girl starts to walk around handing everyone a flower saying sumthing. She cums toward angad.
Girl- Hi. mera naam kripa hai. aur mujhe pata tum mujko nahin jainte but aaj mera birthday. here[ she gives him a flower]
Angad- Happy Birthday.[ he is just styaring at Kripa with the widest smilie.
Kripa- THank You.....um
Angad- Angad
Kripa- kitne pyara naam, Thank you mister Angad[ she smiles sweetly and walks away]
Angad walks to his car holding the flower. He kisses the flower and says Kripa. and he drives home.[ he is thinking of Kripa and how pretty she is]

Out of all the flowers Kripa had she had one red rose. and that rose was given to kripa.

THat night angad fell asleep smileing for the first time in a long holding the flower.

plz post your comments. i will add more to this. hopefully you like it

Posted by: totally_desi Jul 28 2006, 02:58 PM

wow jassi you did an awesome job

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Jul 29 2006, 09:26 AM

QUOTE(totally_desi @ Jul 28 2006, 02:28 PM)

wow jassi you did an awesome job

thanx anjali

Posted by: Luv_u_Panna Jul 29 2006, 06:45 PM

Good job...keep it up...i can't wait for the next part.

Posted by: manai Jul 30 2006, 08:05 AM

yeah good work gals

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Jul 30 2006, 11:21 AM

thanx manai for your comment
do you like the story

Posted by: totally_desi Jul 30 2006, 12:39 PM

hey everyone I will be posting the next part soon

Posted by: Luv_u_Panna Jul 30 2006, 02:40 PM

Great!...i can't wait.

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Jul 31 2006, 01:47 PM

QUOTE(Luv_u_Panna @ Jul 29 2006, 06:15 PM)

Good job...keep it up...i can't wait for the next part.

thanx plz keep reading

Posted by: totally_desi Jul 31 2006, 01:58 PM

Part 2

Recap:That night angad fell asleep smiling for the first time while holding the flower.
The next day

riiiiinnng riiinnggg [it was his cell phone]
angad wakes up
a-arre yeh kaun hai
he picks up the phone
a-hello[in a sleepy voice]
dadi-d
d-hello angad beta tum teek ho na
a- dadi main teek hoon dadi app kaisi ho [in a happy voice]
d-main bhi teek hoon.. main toh bhul hi gayi ...sneha ka phone aya tha
a-woh kya chati hai
d-usne kaha kai woh aap ko miss kar rahi hai aur agla hafta mein uske ghar mein ek party hai
angad rolls his eyes
a-teek hai dadi bye
d-bye beta
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
He goes to take a shower and gets ready.He was putting on his watch when he saw the flower that Kripa gave him the day before.
He smiled took the paper with the address then left the room.He went into his car and drove off.He is driving when he sees Kripa walking.
He parks his car and walks out.
a-Kripa jee ruko
Kripa turns around and sees Angad
k-Angad jee... aap yahan
a-haan woh mere ek confrence hai lekin mujhe pata nahin kahan paar mere pass ek address hai
angad gave kripa the address
k-Angad jee
a-haan
k-yeh address to America mein hain
a-KYA
Kripa showed angad the address
k-dekho yahan America lika hai
a-abb main kya karu
k-pata nahin[ looking a little scared]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Just then Kripa's sister Sweta calls her on her cell phone
s-hello Kripa
k-haan Sweta
s-abhi ghar aao
k-mein aara hi hoon
s-teek hai bye
k-bye...Angad jee mujhe jana hai
a-teek hai
k-byeeee[ she said as she was walking away]
a-bye
Angad was thinking about what to do now.Then he thought he should call Kanan for the address.
ka-hello
a-kanan you gave me the wrong address
ka-kya
a-haan yeh address toh america mein hai
ka-phaar Angad sir
a-mere paas waqt nahin hai address deido
Kannan told him the address but said that he missed the confrence it was two hours ago.
a-kya... mein ab kya karu
ka-angad just come back to mumbai
a-ok i'll arrange my ticket and come tommorow bye
ka-bye sir
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Angad aranged his ticket and his flight was in a hour.So, he went to the house and started packing.After he was done he left and went to the airport.
He reached there just in time for his flight.He sat in the plane and he started listening to music.When all of a sudden he heard Kripa's voice.
a-Kripa?
He took of his head phones and looked around.. he didnt see her.He put them back on when he heard Kripa laughing.Angad looked around
once again and didnt see her.
a-thinking whats happening to me.Why do I always hear and see her when shes not even here why?
Saying that in his mind he fell asleep.He saw Kripa bangra dancing ,smiling ,laughing.He woke up because the lady sitting next to him
shook him and said the flight is over.He got his his bag and left,on his way he kept thinking about Kripa.He couldn't control himself he
just couldn't stop thinking about Kripa.He was just about to leave the airport when he saw Sneha.
a -thinking arre abhi yeh kyun mera pehe paar jayi
sn-hi angad tumhare flight kaisatha
a-teek tha chale
sn-haan

Sorry Im kind of bad at writing in hindi anyways hope you guys like it

Posted by: noreen khan Aug 1 2006, 10:18 AM

wow i like it it'sgood so far!!!!

Posted by: totally_desi Aug 1 2006, 01:09 PM

thanks noreen
please keep reading

Posted by: nimrah Aug 2 2006, 08:21 AM

Great work Jassi and Anjali!! Do keep updating.

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 2 2006, 08:28 AM

QUOTE(noreen khan @ Aug 1 2006, 09:48 AM)

wow i like it it'sgood so far!!!!

thank you plz keep reading

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 2 2006, 08:28 AM

QUOTE(nimrah @ Aug 2 2006, 07:51 AM)

Great work Jassi and Anjali!! Do keep updating.

thanx plz keep readiing

Posted by: snoopy_saba Aug 2 2006, 11:49 PM

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzanjali & jassi

post nother episode quickly i cant wait more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post hurry plz

lovez saba

Posted by: tublu Aug 3 2006, 03:11 AM

added to your reputation keep it up

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 3 2006, 09:51 AM

thanx every1
i am starting to write the third part

Posted by: totally_desi Aug 4 2006, 11:06 AM

ok thats great jassi

Posted by: snoopy_saba Aug 5 2006, 01:47 AM

YAAR JASSI WHEN WILL U POST THE NEXT PART

IM WAITING

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 5 2006, 09:30 AM

QUOTE(snoopy_saba @ Aug 5 2006, 01:17 AM)

YAAR JASSI WHEN WILL U POST THE NEXT PART

IM WAITING

don't worry i am trying my best to finish it

Posted by: monikaseth2010 Aug 6 2006, 12:11 PM

wow verry nice i am waiting jiiiiiiiii

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 6 2006, 04:36 PM

QUOTE(monikaseth2010 @ Aug 6 2006, 11:41 AM)

wow verry nice i am waiting jiiiiiiiii

thank you very much
i am al most done

Posted by: noreen khan Aug 9 2006, 12:54 PM

jassiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

wen r u posting the nxt part
how much hve u got 2 do now?????????

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 9 2006, 01:07 PM

QUOTE(noreen khan @ Aug 9 2006, 12:24 PM)

jassiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

wen r u posting the nxt part
how much hve u got 2 do now?????????

sry noreen ji i was stuck in writer's block

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 9 2006, 01:20 PM

third part

sneha- omg amgad i missed you so much. kyun tum mujhe chor kar chalaga?
[she is yelling]
people at the airport start to stare
angad- sneha letz go. and plz stop, you are embrassing me
sneha-oh i am embrassing you? main to bas tumko bohot miss karya
she hugs him
angad grabs free of her
people start to laugh
angad- chalo
[angad grabs her hand and drags her out of the airport]
angad- what the hell. kya hua tumko? main to bas 2 din k liya gai tha
sneha- to 2 din mera liya 200 sal lagtai hai
[sneha starts to cry]
angad thinking- god she crazy]
angad-sneha tum to bohot pagal ho
sneha-tumhara pyar main to pagal ho
she starts to sing
Deewana Mujhko Log Kahen
Maein Samjhun Jag Hai Deewana

Hansta Hai Koi Surat Pe Meri
Hansta Hai Koi Sirat Pe Meri
Chhota Hi Sahi Par Dil Hai Bada
Maein Jhoomta Paimana
Deewana Mujhko Log...
people on the street start to laugh
angad- whatever[ he starts to walk away]angad turns beet red and starts walking away
sneha- call me[ she starts to run after him]
angad runs in to a cab
angad to the cab driver- go go go go goooooooooooooooooooooooo
yei to pagal hai

kripa lives with her bua in mumbai because she goes to college there.
bua- kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
kripa wakes up from her bed.
kripa- ji aiye bua
bua calls up the stairs- college jaana hai to utto
kripa mumbles and goes in to the shower. 10 minutes later she cums bk out towel drying her hair.
she is humming a song.
kripa starts to think of angad.
kripa thinking- uske smile bohot achi thi
kripa- god yei mujhe kya hoga
kripa smiles and leaves
#####at angad's house
aaliyah- chalo kripa bohot late hai hum
kripa-teek hai bab chalo. main to tumhari intezaar....
she stops talking when she sees angad walking down the stairs
both are staring at each other

will aaliyah tell the truth about angad's relationship to kripa?

Posted by: SALAYAFRIDI Aug 10 2006, 06:05 PM

afridi ki sis ko ye samjh nai aya

Posted by: totally_desi Aug 11 2006, 12:19 PM

nice part jassi
i'll write the next part soon

Posted by: snoopy_saba Aug 11 2006, 08:50 PM

wow

Posted by: kaisa ye pyar hai Aug 14 2006, 10:43 PM

kool!!! continue soon

Posted by: ..¤§wëè±¥¤.. Aug 15 2006, 06:43 PM

is there a new serial coming up or somethinggg??

or r u guyz just posting the episodes of kyph frm the beg.??

Posted by: totally_desi Aug 17 2006, 01:14 PM

QUOTE(..¤§wëè±¥¤.. @ Aug 15 2006, 06:13 PM)

is there a new serial coming up or somethinggg??

or r u guyz just posting the episodes of kyph frm the beg.??

oh no ... this is called a fan-fiction
its a story that jassi and I made up of Angad and Kripa

Posted by: totally_desi Aug 21 2006, 10:58 AM

Part 4

Recap:Kripa stops talking when she sees angad walking down the stairs and both are staring at each other
Angad stops staring just when Aaliyah calls him.And after a while so does Kripa.

aa-bhai yahan aao
Angad walks over to where Aaliyah and Kripa are standing.
aa-Kripa yeh mera bhai Angad aur bhai yeh hai meri dost
Angad interupts and says Kripa right ?
aa-tum dono ek duserai se jante ho
k-haan voh Aaliyah we met in Punjab
aa-ooooh
k-Aaliyah ab hum chalye hum ab bohut late hai
aa-teek hai chalo
Angad turns around to leave
aa-oh ya bhai Sneha bhabhi kai phone aaya tha
a-Oh my god what does she want now
aa-pata nahin anyways bye
a-bye Aaliyah
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
As Kripa and Aaliyah were walking to school they were talking.
k-Aaliyah
aa-yeah?
k-yeh Sneha kyon hai?
aa-ooh voh toh mere bhai ki fiancé hai
k-par jab tumne unse kaha ki Sneha ka phone aaya tha I mean he sounded mad
aa-Kripa the truth is that he doesnt really like her but Sneha bhabhi just loves him.And they are getting married because of their parents.
k-ok [sounding a little confused]

They stopped walking and faced the school.
aa-this is it...St Xavier's College!
k-cool lets go

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
They walk towards the stairs and spot Josh sitting with some of his friends.
k-hi bhai
j-hey Kripa...hey Aaliyah
aa-hey Josh
Aaliyah leans forward and kisses Josh on his cheek.

k-ohh tum duno abhi churu hogaye mein chalti hoon
Before Josh or Aaliyah could say anything she walks off.
Kripa was about to go inside when she saw a red car pull up to the school's parking lot and a tall,muscular,good looking guy came out of it.
You guessed it ..It's Angad

He walks over to where Josh and Aaliyah were and started talking to them.Kripa was still standing near the door,lost in her thoughts.
After they were done talking,Aaliyah came up to her and shook her.
aa-Kriipaaa
k-huh what?
aa-kahan kogayi ho
k-kuch nahin lets go
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
They all go inside and there was a big crowd since it was the first day.Seeing all this Kripa got very nervous.She bent down because
she droped her book.She stood up and then couldn't find Aaliyah or Josh,she was looking around when someone acidently pushed
her.She was about to fall when Angad appeared out of no where and caught her.They both looked into each other eyes for a long
time.Then Angad finally let go of her.
k-Thanks Angad
a-oh no problem
k-could you please help me find my classroom as I am new here
a-sure why not
k-ok it's room #105
a-well thats great...thats my class also
Angad takes Kripa to the classroom.
a-here we are
k-thanks alot
a-no problem
They go inside and the class begins.The teacher was talking about something but Angad wasnt paying attention and she noticed.
teacher =t
t-MR.ANGAD KHANNA [yelling]
a-oh ah yes m'aam
t-chootiyans katam huiye hai..pay attention
a-yes m'aam
Kripa on the other hand was smiling at the face Angad was making.She was trying not to laugh but couldnt stop herself.
The teacher saw her then looked at the paper on her desk and said.
t-Ms.Kripa Sharma would you like to tell the class why you are laughing?
k-kuch nahin m'aam
t-tum yahan nayi aayi ho na
k-jee haan
t-well ms. Kripa yahan humare pass rules hai
k-theek hai

The teacher FINALLY started the lesson.She was spliting the class in pairs (a boy and a girl per pair)
She wanted each pair to pick a song and they would have to sing it together at the school's music festival.And of course
Angad and Kripa were paired together.And then class was over.
Kripa went out in the hall and Angad caught up with her.
a-so Kripa do you know how to sing
k-of course and you
a-i guess..so which type of song you want to sing
k-umm i dont know..how about a love song
a-i dont think so
k-fine then what do you want to sing
a-anything BUT a love song
k-theek hai,theek hai
Angad was now walking around in circles trying to think of a song.Kripa was just standing there thinking also.Then all of a sudden
Angad stops and smiles.
a-Kripa I got an idea
k-kya tell me
a-at the concert lets sing...Ladki Kyon Na Jaane from the movie Hum Tum
k-Angad tum bhi na
a-Whaaat I like that song and i think it kinda suits us

WHAT WILL KRIPA SAY?WILL SHE AGREE?WILL THEY SING LADKI KYON NA JAANE AT THE MUSIC FESTIVAL?

TO FIND OUT KEEP READING PYAR SE KYUN DARTE HAI DIL!

Posted by: totally_desi Aug 21 2006, 01:00 PM

Hey Guys Please Post Your Comments And Predictions

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 21 2006, 01:35 PM

g8 anjali

Posted by: totally_desi Aug 21 2006, 01:42 PM

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Aug 21 2006, 01:35 PM)

g8 anjali

thanks jassi
glad you liked it

Posted by: noreen khan Aug 22 2006, 08:27 AM

hey wow!! I just wanted to read more and more i think kripa mite not like it but then angad mite talk her aorund it but i cant wait to read wats gonna happen next! Keep It Up!!

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 22 2006, 09:26 AM

QUOTE(totally_desi @ Aug 21 2006, 01:42 PM)

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Aug 21 2006, 01:35 PM)

g8 anjali

thanks jassi
glad you liked it

=] welcums
i love the story and can't wait to start my part

Posted by: totally_desi Aug 23 2006, 11:25 AM

QUOTE(noreen khan @ Aug 22 2006, 08:27 AM)

hey wow!! I just wanted to read more and more i think kripa mite not like it but then angad mite talk her aorund it but i cant wait to read wats gonna happen next! Keep It Up!!

Thanks noreen for your perdiction
And im glad you liked it

Posted by: totally_desi Aug 23 2006, 11:26 AM

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Aug 22 2006, 09:26 AM)

QUOTE(totally_desi @ Aug 21 2006, 01:42 PM)

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Aug 21 2006, 01:35 PM)

g8 anjali

thanks jassi
glad you liked it

=] welcums
i love the story and can't wait to start my part

yeah i love it also
and i cant wait to read it lolz

Posted by: noreen khan Aug 28 2006, 10:48 AM

Jassiiiiiii
Have you finished writing the next part I'm eager to read it
Plzzzz hurry and post It In!!!!

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 28 2006, 11:35 AM

QUOTE(noreen khan @ Aug 28 2006, 10:48 AM)

Jassiiiiiii
Have you finished writing the next part I'm eager to read it
Plzzzz hurry and post It In!!!!

don't worry i will finish soon =]

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Aug 28 2006, 11:38 AM

sry guys it might take me a while to finish the part cuz school is starting very soon. and i have homework. yes homework over the break thanx to honors english! =]

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Sep 8 2006, 04:32 PM

okay guys since i am not very gud in writeing in hindi english
so i will write in english just pretend it is written in hindi =]
[b]angad- how cum every girl like lovey dovey love songs?
kripa- uh! becuz they have lotz of meaning and they rock!
angad- yeah but sumtimes they are so sad
kripa- so life isn't exactly happy all the time
angad- oh this is from smile too much girl
kripa smiles
angad- see there it is[ he points to her smile]
kripa stops smileing
angad- hey why did you stop? you look rly pretty when you smile
kripa[smileing]- aww really angad
angad- really
kripa- really
angad- reallly kripa
angad hugs her
angad say while hugging her- i lie so well don't i
kripa breaks out of his hug
kripa- you fraud you cheat! she starts hitting him
angad grabs her hands and says- i wasn't lieing
he looks at her straight in the eye
kripa- well your smile is really nice too
[angad letz go of her hands]
angad- i know lotz of girls tell me that
kripa- oh really
angad - yeah
kripa- really
angad- no actually no know has ever told me that i have a nice smile
kripa- well now i am the first one
angad- yeah you are thank you
kripa- friends never say thank you
angad- fine i will give my thanx to sumother girl
kripa- what!
angad- just joking
[ both start laughing]
angad- [looks at his watch] omg it is 10:00 i have to get home soon. or else dadi will get mad at me
kripa- oh well you are lucky to have sumone that cares for you
angad- yeah i am but you have your bua rite
kripa- bua loves me but she just..... it is a long story[ a tear rolls down her cheek]
[ there was like a minute of slience]
kripa- hey what song are we going to sing[ she says as she wipes her tears]
[angad is shocked that behind this beautiful face is alot of pain]

angad- okay fine since you are my best friend you can choose the song
kripa- awwwww how nice of you!
angad- you know how i am. i am the best
kripa- yeah yeah whatever
angad- no kripa you know i am the best
kripa- you are so cocky, really
angad- okay okay i am not the best you are, and i am cocky. letz just pick out this song so i can go home and go to sleep
kripa- i have to think about this. i want this to be perfect
angad- okay fine whatever i have to go home you think about it and call me
angad start to walk away. he is rite next to the door now
kripa- i love you
angad stops walking and turns back. he feels great. a smile grows on his face
angad- i love[ kripa interrupts him]
kripa- that is the song i want to sing from mr. india
angad-whispers]- i love you too[/b]

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 9 2006, 12:44 PM

OMG Jassii
That was a great part
It was just awesome
Keep it up
Im going to start writing my part very soon

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Sep 9 2006, 01:15 PM

QUOTE(totally_desi @ Sep 9 2006, 12:44 PM)

OMG Jassii
That was a great part
It was just awesome
Keep it up
Im going to start writing my part very soon

thank you sooooooooooooooooo much
hey you are the 50th post in this thread!

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 9 2006, 01:19 PM

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Sep 9 2006, 01:15 PM)

QUOTE(totally_desi @ Sep 9 2006, 12:44 PM)

OMG Jassii
That was a great part
It was just awesome
Keep it up
Im going to start writing my part very soon

thank you sooooooooooooooooo much
hey you are the 50th post in this thread!

you are very welcome
really?
thats awesome

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Sep 9 2006, 01:44 PM

QUOTE(totally_desi @ Sep 9 2006, 01:19 PM)

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Sep 9 2006, 01:15 PM)

QUOTE(totally_desi @ Sep 9 2006, 12:44 PM)

OMG Jassii
That was a great part
It was just awesome
Keep it up
Im going to start writing my part very soon

thank you sooooooooooooooooo much
hey you are the 50th post in this thread!

you are very welcome
really?
thats awesome

yeah and this thread has almost 1000 veiws

Posted by: snoopy_saba Sep 10 2006, 12:58 AM

let me tell u
anjali & jassi
why r u both not trying to balaji
as we have too see the love couples together like angad & kripa in ur story

u both done a gr8 jop
sabz

Posted by: noreen khan Sep 10 2006, 08:01 AM

Wow....

Great WORK!!!!!! Jassi
I really wanna read more n more so plzzzzzzzzzzz do hurry

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Sep 10 2006, 04:48 PM

QUOTE(snoopy_saba @ Sep 10 2006, 12:58 AM)

let me tell u
anjali & jassi
why r u both not trying to balaji
as we have too see the love couples together like angad & kripa in ur story

u both done a gr8 jop
sabz

wow thanx soooooooooo much

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Sep 10 2006, 04:48 PM

QUOTE(noreen khan @ Sep 10 2006, 08:01 AM)

Wow....

Great WORK!!!!!! Jassi
I really wanna read more n more so plzzzzzzzzzzz do hurry

thank very much. a new part will be here too

Posted by: Iris Sep 10 2006, 08:12 PM

gr8 Work Jassi n Anjali
keep it up
i havn't read all d parts...i'll read dem later but its really nice
thnx Anjali n Jassi

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Sep 11 2006, 02:34 PM

QUOTE(Iris @ Sep 10 2006, 08:12 PM)

gr8 Work Jassi n Anjali

keep it up
i havn't read all d parts...i'll read dem later but its really nice
thnx Anjali n Jassi

thanx plz read it soon

Posted by: snoopy_saba Sep 16 2006, 03:12 AM

kab aaye ga nayA part

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 16 2006, 09:41 AM

QUOTE(snoopy_saba @ Sep 16 2006, 03:12 AM)

kab aaye ga nayA part

really soon i already wrote it
just need to fix it abit

Posted by: manai Sep 18 2006, 01:07 PM

great job really nice story

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 18 2006, 05:49 PM

Part 6

Recap:angad-whispers i love you too
k-tumhe kuch kaha
a-nahin i didnt say anything anyways Kripa lets leave now
k-ok lets go
They both go home
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Next Day At Rehearsals
Angad was walking around the rehearsal room in circles.
A-Yeh Kripa kahaan hai [thinking]
Just then Kripa comes into the room
k-Im sorry I came late
a-oh its ok lets start rehearsing
k-ok
They start rehearsing

kaate nahi katate ye din ye raat
kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
lo aaj main kehta hu i love you
koi nahi bas tum ho saath
kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
lo aaj main kehti hu i love you
kaisi hava hai
dhuli dhuli
aaj fiza hain
khili khili
saara nazaara
naya naya
dil ne pukaara
piya piya
tumne jo li angdaai hai phir baat vahi yaad aayi hai
lo aaj main kehta hu i love you
mahaka mahaka
tera badan
bahaka bahaka
mera ye man
chhalaka chhalaka
roop tera
halka halka
nasha mera
jab a hi gai main paas tere kah doon jo dil mein hai mere
lo aaj main kehti hu i love u

a-wow kripa your a great singer
k-thanks your pretty good yourself
a-thanks alot
They both smile at each other
a-kripa would you like to have lunch? My treat!
k-Angad i would love to but i cant
a-c'mon kripa please [he makes a cute face]
k-ok fine
a-ok then lets go [he said it very happily]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
They go to a nice place and they sit down.
k-wow Angad this place is so nice
a-yeah i know i love it here
They eat their lunch together and chat.
a-so how long have you lived in mumbai?
k-not very long i moved here a few weeks ago as you may know i lived in Punjab and you?
a-oh ok...well i pretty much lived here all my life
k-thats good so you must know the place pretty well would you mind showing me around?
a-yeah i guess i do and i would love to
k-thanks that would be fun
a-lets go now
k-but Angad
a-Kripa chalo na it will be fun
k-fine lets go
They both finish eating and leave
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
In Angad's Car

A-Kripa is there a certain place you would like to go to?
k-yeah there is
a-kya hai?
k-kya hum ek beach par jaa sakte?
a-your in luck theres a beach near by here
Kripa then gives Angad a big smile.Angad sees that and smiles back.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
At the Beach

a-Here we are the beach
k-wow its so beautiful
a-indeed it is [he was talking about Kripa]
k-Angad
a-haan Kripa bholo
k-can we go in the water?
a-sure lets go
They go near the water so that its just up to their feet.Just then Kripa splashes Angad.

a-Kripa what was that for?
k-kuch nahin its just fun [shes laughs]
She turns around and just then Angad splashes her back.
k-Angaaad
Angad looks at her all wet and laughs at her.
k-Angad i'll get you back
She then starts running after him.But of course Angad is running faster then her so she cant catch up.He turned around but Kripa didnt know and she kept running then she slipped on the wet sand.Angad saw that she was going to fall and immidiately ran towards her to catch her.She was just about to fall down but Angad came just in time to save her.They looked into each others eyes for a long time.
a-kripa are you alright?Tum theek ho na?
k-haan Angad im fine
a-good now lets go
He turned around and was about to go when Kripa splashed his back.Angad then turns around.
a-Kripaa you got me all wet
Kripa laughs at him and says "Angad i told you i'll get you back".
Angad smiles and kripa starts laughing again.
a-ab chalo pagli
He puts his arm around her shoulders and they both walk to his car.He drops Kripa to her house and then goes to his house.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
At Angad's House
Angad was in his room laying on his bed thinking about Kripa.He was thinking of how they spent so much time together.
a-I love you [he said it out loud]
Aaliyah was at his door and heard what he said and then she entered his room.
aa-Bhai who do you love?
a-what?what are you talking about?
aa-bhai I just heard you say i love you..c'mon bhai you cant lie to me
a-fine i did say it [interrupted]
aa-its Kripa isnt it?
a-huh?what?Uhh tumhe kaisa pata?
aa-bhai its so obvious whenever she comes over you look so happy and just now when i said her name I saw the way your face lit up
a-aaliyah i dont know if this is love and what about if she doesnt love me?
aa-ok bhai close your eyes
a-kyun?
aa-just close them
Angad closes his eyes
aa-ok bhai when you close your eyes and you see someone thats the person you love!So tell me bhai who do you see?
a-Kripa [he opens his eyes]
Aaliyah smiles and says
aa-see i told you..you do love her and i bet she loves you just as much but then she frowns
a-yeah..aaliyah why are you frowning?
aa-bhai but Sneha bhabhi?
Angad also frowned.He didnt love Sneha but she really loved him and he didnt want to hurt her.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
But just then you see Sneha by the door.
S-Angad

Both Angad and Aaliyah turn to see Sneha at the door.They were complety shocked.
a-Sneha
s-aaliyah can i talk with your bhai alone for a while
aa-yeah sure [she leaves the room]
a-Sneha woh...um...im [nterrupted]
s-Angad its not your fault its mine
a-kya par Sneha
s-nahin Angad you never loved me you only agreed to marry me for your parents sake
a-Sneha im really sorry for all this
s-Angad you deserve to have your love...i guess we weren't meant for each other

Angad felt really bad for what just happened.He didnt want to hurt Sneha at all.
s-Angad jao uske paas...go to her and be happy..always stay happy
Sneha was really sad but she knew she was doing the right thing.Just then she started crying.
a-Sneha dont cry please stop crying [ he hugged her]
She lets go of him.
s-Angad i'll explain to my parents and tell your parents that i dont want to get married to you...I'll brake the engagment...they will understand
a-Sneha you dont have to do all this
s-No angad i have to and i will
She then runs out of the room.

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?WILL ANGAD'S PARENTS LET ANGAD& SNEHA'S ENGAGMENT BRAKE?WILL THEY ACCEPT ANGAD'S LOVE FOR KRIPA?DOES KRIPA LOVE ANGAD AS MUCH AS HE LOVES HER?TO FIND OUT KEEP READING PYAR SE KYUN DARTE HAI DIL!PLEASE POST YOUR COMMENTS AND PREDICTIONS!
Well thats my part.Hope you guys liked it.I know theres alot going on and theres like so much drama in this part.
Anyways please post your comments and predictions.

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 18 2006, 05:52 PM

QUOTE(manai @ Sep 18 2006, 01:07 PM)

great job really nice story

thanks alot manai
keep reading

Posted by: cutie_pie Sep 19 2006, 05:21 AM

great work yaar
ireally liked it

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Sep 19 2006, 02:22 PM

awsum work anjali

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 19 2006, 04:25 PM

QUOTE(cutie_pie @ Sep 19 2006, 05:21 AM)

great work yaar
ireally liked it

thanks alot
glad u liked it

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 19 2006, 04:26 PM

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Sep 19 2006, 02:22 PM)

awsum work anjali

thanks a bunch jassi
write your part soon

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Sep 19 2006, 05:35 PM

QUOTE(totally_desi @ Sep 19 2006, 04:26 PM)

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Sep 19 2006, 02:22 PM)

awsum work anjali

thanks a bunch jassi
write your part soon

ok i will

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 19 2006, 05:57 PM

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Sep 19 2006, 05:35 PM)

QUOTE(totally_desi @ Sep 19 2006, 04:26 PM)

QUOTE(punjabi kyph fan @ Sep 19 2006, 02:22 PM)

awsum work anjali

thanks a bunch jassi
write your part soon

ok i will

ok thats great

Posted by: cutie_pie Sep 20 2006, 05:48 AM

waiting eagerly for the next part
please write it soon....

Posted by: punjabi kyph fan Sep 20 2006, 01:26 PM

QUOTE(cutie_pie @ Sep 20 2006, 05:48 AM)

waiting eagerly for the next part
please write it soon....

ok when i get time i will start

Posted by: snoopy_saba Sep 27 2006, 02:20 AM

anjali u simply rocks

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 28 2006, 04:28 PM

QUOTE(snoopy_saba @ Sep 27 2006, 02:20 AM)

anjali u simply rocks

thanks saba

Posted by: rush22 Sep 30 2006, 09:14 AM

thanx

Posted by: totally_desi Sep 30 2006, 07:19 PM

QUOTE(rush22 @ Sep 30 2006, 09:14 AM)

thanx

your welcome
please keep reading the story

Posted by: nimrah Oct 1 2006, 03:34 AM

Wonderful work there Anjali and Jassi.
U guys r better than Ekta!

Posted by: manai Oct 2 2006, 02:36 PM

lol nims your rite

Posted by: totally_desi Oct 3 2006, 06:43 PM

QUOTE(nimrah @ Oct 1 2006, 03:34 AM)

Wonderful work there Anjali and Jassi.
U guys r better than Ekta!

thanks alot nimrah
lolzzzzz
i think our story has more logic tho

Posted by: totally_desi Oct 3 2006, 06:43 PM

QUOTE(manai @ Oct 2 2006, 02:36 PM)

lol nims your rite

lolzzz manai
you guys are funny

Posted by: Iris Oct 9 2006, 07:52 PM

QUOTE(nimrah @ Oct 1 2006, 03:04 AM)

Wonderful work there Anjali and Jassi.
U guys r better than Ekta!

ur ryt nimmi

u both done a gr8 job

next part kab ayega???

Posted by: totally_desi Nov 11 2006, 11:09 AM

QUOTE(Iris @ Oct 9 2006, 07:52 PM)

QUOTE(nimrah @ Oct 1 2006, 03:04 AM)

Wonderful work there Anjali and Jassi.
U guys r better than Ekta!

ur ryt nimmi

u both done a gr8 job

next part kab ayega???

thanks
i'll post it now

Posted by: totally_desi Nov 11 2006, 11:17 AM

Part 7
Recap:Sneha finds out that angad loves kripa and brakes engagment

After Sneha ran out of the room,Angad sat down on his bed and felt really bad for hurting her.He didnt even realise when he fell in love but he was glad that she understood him.Just then someone calls Angad.He picks up the phone and says...
a-hellooo
k-hi Angad its me kripa
Angad smiled and was happy!
a-yeah kripa why did you call?
k-well i wanted to know when our next rehersal is
a-oh ok its tomorrow
k-ok well bye then
a-uh wait
k-what?
a-good night
Kripa smiled
k-same to you
They both hung up and were on their bed.
a-kripa i love you(thinking)
and on the other side you see kripa trying to sleep
k-why cant i stop thinking about him?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Next Day
Angad is getting ready and was about to leave for rehersals when someone called him.He picked up the phone.
a-hello
k-hi angad
a-oh kripa its you...kya baat hai?
k-angad i was wondering if you could drive me to rehersals my car isnt working
a-oh ok i'll be there in 10 minutes
k-ok thanks a lot
a-no problem
They hang up and Angad goes to pick her up.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She was waiting outside and then goes in the car.He starts driving and then puts on some loud rock music.
k-angad turn this off please(covering her ears)
a-why?
k-its so loud
a-ok ok i'll turn it off(turns it off)
a-what would you like to listen then?
k-umm i dont know do you have any cds
a-yeah (he shows her where they are)
k-ok umm put this one
Angad puts in the cd and finds out that its a Himesh Reshammiya cd
a-good choice
k-thanks(laughs)
They listen to it for the rest of the way.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
After that they go inside the studio to reherse their song.
kaate nahi katate ye din ye raat
kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
lo aaj main kehta hu i love you
koi nahi bas tum ho saath
kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
lo aaj main kehti hu i love you
kaisi hava hai
dhuli dhuli
aaj fiza hain
khili khili
saara nazaara
naya naya
dil ne pukaara
piya piya
tumne jo li angdaai hai phir baat vahi yaad aayi hai
lo aaj main kehta hu i love you
mahaka mahaka
tera badan
bahaka bahaka
mera ye man
chhalaka chhalaka
roop tera
halka halka
nasha mera
jab a hi gai main paas tere kah doon jo dil mein hai mere
lo aaj main kehti hu i love u

a-ok kripa lets go
k- theek hai
They go in the car and someone calls Angad.
a-helloo
aa-hey bhai its aaliyah
a-oh hey whats up?
aa-listen today is josh's birthday i want to give him a suprise
a-sounds great...what should i do?
aa-bhai could you please buy a cake and ask kripa to come im sure she will come if you ask
a-aaliyah(blushing a bit)
aa-kya main sach toh bol rahi hoon(laughs)
a-tum bhi na byeee
aa-theek hai bye
They hang up and Angad tells Kripa about the suprise party.
k-wow thats going to be fun
a-oh yeah mind if i go get the cake
k-yeah sure go ahead need help?
a-ok
They both go into the bakery and pick out a delicious looking chocolate cake(Josh's Favorite)

He drops Kripa home
a-ok come over in about an hour or two
k-ok byeee
a-byee
Angad goes home and helps aaliyah with everything(food,decorations,etc)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Party
Everyone is ready and guests are starting to arrive including Kripa!

Angad is wearing:

Aaliyah is wearing:

Kripa is wearing:

aa-Hey kripa i love your outfit
k-thanks love yours also
aa-thanks well kripa if you would excuse me i need to call josh over here
k-ok go ahead
aa-ok enjoy the party
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aaliyah and Josh's Phone Conversation

aa-hey josh HAPPY BIRTHDAY
j-thanks jaan
aa-you are very welcome
aa-acha suno tum mere ghar aja aur phir hum celebrate karenge
j-theek hai i'll be there in 10 minutes...love you byee
aa-love you too byee
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Angad walks upto Kripa

a-hey kripa
k-hey angad
a-your looking very nice
k-thnaks so are you
a-yeah i know
They both laugh...then Aaliyah comes in the middle of the room and makes an announcement!
aa-HEY EVERYBODY JOSH IS COMING IN TEN MINUTES BE READY
Just then Josh enters the room
Everyone-SUPRISEEEE
Josh Stood there shocked.Aaliyah walked upto him and smiled.
aa-like my suprise?
j-yeah its wonderful
Aaliyah kisses him on the cheek
aa-Happy Birthday Jaan
Josh kisses her cheeck also
j-thanks
a-cough chough
Aaliyah and Josh stood there blushing
k-you guys are soo cute together
aa&j-thanks(kinda blushing)
They all partyed until midnight.

Well thats my part!Hope you guys liked it.Sorry we didnt update for a looong time its because of school.We decided that we will only post parts on weekends.Anyways keep posting your comments and predictions and keep reading PYAR SE KYUN DARTE HAI DIL